I always want to have more time to read these and comment, but at the end of the day I'm so exhausted I tend to just watch movies and knit. Anyway, I enjoyed your writing! Though it seems like just a quick scene, there's definitely more going on to read about. (Does this make sense? My brain might not be on yet.) What I mean is there's depth? Despite the fact that you could say in two sentences, "These two characters find themselves in a completely dark room. They find a door and break it down", instead you give them lives and character and a reason for the reader to be interested in them. So yeah, hope I find time to read more of what you post soon!