clare_dragonfly: drawing of a man in a brown turtleneck, looking away, text: time for a hundred visions and revisions (Writing: visions and revisions)
Clare-Dragonfly ([personal profile] clare_dragonfly) wrote 2012-05-11 05:07 pm (UTC)

Hmm... that might work but actually I think the error there is something entirely different XD I'm going to take out "than enough" because it's honestly pretty repetitive.

...or maybe I should take out "than he would need"? Hmm. Which is better: "more money than he would need for the provisioning" or "more than enough money for the provisioning"?

Hehe, thanks!

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