smw: A woman sits at a typewriter, pages flying, a plug in the back of her awesomely big-curly hair. (Default)
SMW ([personal profile] smw) wrote in [personal profile] clare_dragonfly 2012-09-18 11:50 pm (UTC)

... so many times she doesn’t know the words for the numbers to count them.

I love this line, and also the sensory richness throughout. Besides which I'm a sucker for the theme of temptation. Well done!

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