This was lovely. I quite liked the setting you had for the shield and I thought you handled Ursula's return to her old home quite well--that strange sense of familiarity.
If I had one criticism, it would be that to me Ursula felt a little younger than 19... at least until they return to the court.
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Date: 2014-08-10 06:32 am (UTC)If I had one criticism, it would be that to me Ursula felt a little younger than 19... at least until they return to the court.