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writing is hard
May. 29th, 2012 10:03 pmI hate titles. Help me come up with a title for my Warehouse 13/Criminal Minds casefic crossover. Something with neutral in it, maybe?
In a different story, I appear to have used the sentence "The fountain was more patient." I have no idea what this could possibly mean. (It's more patient than it used to be, as opposed to more patient than something else. ...also there's an important fountain later in the story, so I don't know if they should be tied together?)
I can understand the main character personifying the fountain, but why patient? Besides the fact that I can't figure out why, it's definitely too positive of an attribute for this scene. My best guess is that I intended to write another word starting with a P, as that's something I do fairly often, but I can't figure out what.
In a different story, I appear to have used the sentence "The fountain was more patient." I have no idea what this could possibly mean. (It's more patient than it used to be, as opposed to more patient than something else. ...also there's an important fountain later in the story, so I don't know if they should be tied together?)
I can understand the main character personifying the fountain, but why patient? Besides the fact that I can't figure out why, it's definitely too positive of an attribute for this scene. My best guess is that I intended to write another word starting with a P, as that's something I do fairly often, but I can't figure out what.