writing is hard
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clare_dragonflyI hate titles. Help me come up with a title for my Warehouse 13/Criminal Minds casefic crossover. Something with neutral in it, maybe?
In a different story, I appear to have used the sentence "The fountain was more patient." I have no idea what this could possibly mean. (It's more patient than it used to be, as opposed to more patient than something else. ...also there's an important fountain later in the story, so I don't know if they should be tied together?)
I can understand the main character personifying the fountain, but why patient? Besides the fact that I can't figure out why, it's definitely too positive of an attribute for this scene. My best guess is that I intended to write another word starting with a P, as that's something I do fairly often, but I can't figure out what.
In a different story, I appear to have used the sentence "The fountain was more patient." I have no idea what this could possibly mean. (It's more patient than it used to be, as opposed to more patient than something else. ...also there's an important fountain later in the story, so I don't know if they should be tied together?)
I can understand the main character personifying the fountain, but why patient? Besides the fact that I can't figure out why, it's definitely too positive of an attribute for this scene. My best guess is that I intended to write another word starting with a P, as that's something I do fairly often, but I can't figure out what.
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Date: 2012-05-30 02:12 am (UTC)Neutral Target
The Practicality of Neutrality
Without details, that's about all I can come up with. *g*
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Date: 2012-05-30 02:18 am (UTC)I don't want to give details and spoil the story ;)
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Date: 2012-05-30 04:01 am (UTC)Is this your cm_bigbang piece or something else?
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Date: 2012-05-30 04:06 am (UTC)The premise is that Emily, instead of going into witness protection in France, gets spirited away by Mrs. Frederic and does her witness protection in the Warehouse. And then gets the two teams together for a case.
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